Any poëts wanting to freewrite together

How about just starting a poëm?

Everybody does a line, quatrine or verse… then another takes over.

No rules, just inspiration…

I’ll start

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When the cloud’s cheecks started pooring tears,
Sharfs of greeve with endless speed ~
Indeed came the hurt not on his own,
Also family’s as suns got oversnown

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But inside that cloud a gentle calm,
A place where there could come no harm,
We sit alone inside our storm,
Waiting for sun to keep us warm,

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Still radiations of frustrations keep gazing ~
amazing feelings of sensation just without.
Fears builded out of doubts transform,
A warm place ~ can be a glitter storm

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I doubt I can withstand this storm.
Like I could ever bend the norm.
I’ll end up struck by lightning feeling torn.
Worn out over struggling for a light to see.
Insteed I choose prayer so that universe will give me hell but eventually it will save me.

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Norms are bented, in storms mented ~
Instead they slentered like our lives ~~
instead ~
Growing pains explaining explendid…
Our lives mented, more then above we…
Mention…#a next another sentence, splended

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Just came across this one :

A rare, old bird is a pelican whose beak can hold more than his belly can.

He can hold in his beak enough food for a week
But I’m darned if I know how the hell he can.

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@ThajokerNL @Mno @Buts @Fargesia_murielae and fellow dutchies :netherlands: i guess google translate will f%ck it up :wink:

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Wow! Jij kan het!
Die komt binnen.
:pray:
:heart:
:kissing_heart:

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Moet ook als schrijver i guess :facepunch::heart: dankjewel

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@Dolse71 , how about this. Usualy i dont writer a lot in english…

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I think this is great, you should do more in English but only bc I’m selfish :joy:. Stick to your roots my friend, its who you are.

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I’ll do both then , always did but more in dutch mostly but i’ll keep you posted

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random question is the other person in the video a mate or your partner, you work well together. Sorry but that’s my mind for me :joy:

A fellow artist, not my partner. Was actualy the first time we worked Together, didnt practice also. Thats why the mic was not setted up to good volume, it was live so we didnt mention it earlier
I’m bound 2 be single for life i guess :rofl:

20 year relationship this end, be careful what you wish for :joy: :joy: :joy:

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Lol

I had a nice streak till 3 years ago but when i got robbed, shot and relapsed it all fell appart. 12 operations and2 years with a bag on my belly to shit in and all the medicatie made it to much i guess and it depressed me into a relapse after many many years. Now im just taking care of me but still love the 1 that was.

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fuck man, I’ve not read this anywhere, do tell or is it too much.

I recall reading on here that Joost got shot and robbed at work. He ended up having countless surgeries. A family member gave him a tattoo in the hosp to let the nurses know what temperature to make his bath water. Joost did break the guys nose though which helped to get DNA. I think they caught the guy. Joost has been through hell and back. He’s one strong fucking guy. I admire his hard work coming off the drugs and fighting the daily pain.

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respect where its due.

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