Poem about sobriety

I made a little poem about giving up the booze. What do you think?
Thanks guys :grinning:

The feeling of the fog lifting is here,
My head is starting to feel a lot more clear,
The days of worrying coming to an end,
Maybe I’m not going round the bend,

Maybe just one more chance,
To get drunk and to dance,
I won’t make a fool of myself I promise,
No longer looking into the abyss,

I know I can moderate my intake,
Who am I kidding, I’ve a made a big mistake,
I have no choice but to give it all up,
if I take one more drink from my cup.
Why am I like this, I really don’t know,
I feel like I’m living my life but at an all time low.

I’ve done it, I’ve fallen from grace,
But the road to sobriety isn’t a race,
The ups and downs are a part of me,
I promise my love, I’ll get clean and be sober free,

No longer will you have to pick me up from the floor,
I don’t want to be there no more,
Crawling around in my drunken state,
This hectic life is not for me, nor my fate,

Just let me show you, one last chance,
To be care free, to dance,
My glass is empty and that’s how it will stay,
I just need to make it today

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I love it!!! :heart::heart:

I had a dream last night and in my dream i made up a poem. Very strange that I remembered it first thing this morning and I wrote it down. This is what came to me in my dream…

The only place HAPPINESS should
not be,
Is in a glass at the bottom of the sea
If you happen to find it there
You truly should start to swim and
care
For HAPPINESS comes from many
sorces
But in the depths
You’ll face horrible forces.

Im having crazy dreams, but I liked this one.

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