Poetry? Really?

This forum’s a great leveller - all we really know about each other is that we’ve fallen, we’re hurting, and we want our lives back, we want to fight back.
Dylan Thomas’s father was an alcoholic, a ‘lost cause’.
It’s believed that Thomas was also, at the point of writing the poem that follows, an alcoholic.
Some think that it was written for his father as a ‘rallying cry’.
However, here’s a slightly alternative view:
‘It is a strong invocation for us to live boldly and to fight. It implores us to not just “go gentle into that good night,” but to rage against it. Even at the end of life, when “grave men” are near death, the poem instructs us to burn with life. The poem’s meaning is life affirming’.
I believe good poetry motivates - see what you think. And maybe you have something to post too.

DO NOT GO GENTLE INTO THAT GOOD NIGHT

Do not go gentle into that good night,
Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

Though wise men at their end know dark is right,
Because their words had forked no lightning they
Do not go gentle into that good night.

Good men, the last wave by, crying how bright
Their frail deeds might have danced in a green bay,
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

Wild men who caught and sang the sun in flight,
And learn, too late, they grieved it on its way,
Do not go gentle into that good night.

Grave men, near death, who see with blinding sight
Blind eyes could blaze like meteors and be gay,
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

And you, my father, there on the sad height,
Curse, bless, me now with your fierce tears, I pray.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

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I was a bit worried everyone’d be ‘wtf’.
It just summed my first 14 days up. Day one started after a night of no sleep and hallucinations, couldn’t take it any more. Fight or flight!

Which 2, if you don’t mind me asking?

A lot of us are introverted, artistic, weird, and very intelligent. We hid behind alcohol because we felt different. So we appreciate this. Thanks for sharing.

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Sorry to hear that - keep fighting.

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He became quite determined to become English, wasn’t he.
Four Quartets was being discussed on BBC Radio 4 a couple of days ago. I imagine he’d like that!

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"I stopped chasing
when I knew
it was pointless,
and the paths you’d take me
were endless.

I stopped chasing
because
you would always pretend
that I’d caught you
and then make me play tag
all over again.

But you would always
make your own rules
so I would never catch you.

I never had a chance,
I never would have won,
anyways."

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2:36 am

"2am is for the poets who
can’t sleep because their
minds are alive with words
for someone who’s not there.

For the alcoholics drinking
themselves into amnesia to
forget someone who left.

2am is not for the lovers
asleep in each other’s arms.

It is for the lonely. The ones
who are in love with the
loved but are not loved in
return."

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Especially liked 2.36. I’m sure it resonates for many of us on the forum, 2-3am being quite a popular time!

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Yes, I still wake around 2:30 sometimes. I get up and read some good stuff rather than fight it. Very popular time indeed.

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Nothing good happens after 2am :wink: