Alcohol alliteration poetry

So I kinda wrote an alliterative poem thing based on alcohol to show life before and after sobriety. What do you think? Not sure if it’s kinda stupid or what haha.

Alcoholics anonymous, actually, apparent.
Alcohol abbreviates ambition, aspirations,
Alcohol amalgamates anxieties, anger and apocalyptic actions,
An active addiction, an acceptable abuse.
Actively alone,
Always aching,
Ashamed.

Alcoholic archives, actually awake.
Art allows attraction, autonomy,
Art attacks anxieties, anger and apocalyptic actions,
An active addiction, an acceptable abuse.
Actively analytical,
Always alert,
Ambitious.

Should I go on to do b. Like with a theme of booze?

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Very good! Yes B!

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Yes! B please!

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Thanks! I might post it