I find the format inspiring. Anyone have some?
I’ve never been able to figure out what a haiku is…well, I know what it is…but I could never write one. I’m not even sure I would recognize it if I read it…other than it is an odd sounding poem. LOL
When you feeling blue.
Don’t know quite what you will do.
Read the big book man
5 -7-5 syllables in each sentence.
Poignant man. I really like that.
Sober time used well
Take a breath, learn from others
Pure inspiration.
Some of you guys are
Too clever for your own good
Happy Thanksgiving
(did I do it right?)
Dunno. First attempt above. Heard of them before but never took the time to find out how they were constructed.
I’ve never heard of them.
Keanu Reaves was flexing haiku’s in 47 Ronin movie… I think.
I was a damn drunk
I found the power within
Now its all good, bruh.
Sobriety calls
As I fall to rock bottom
I can only rise
When I go to bed
and lay down my sleepy head
I know that I’m sober
Drunk poops are the worst
Sobriety bakes fine loaves
Heart, mind, bowels rejoice
Very nice job!
Take shovel away.
Bottoms personally deep
Take action to stop.
I hid from myself
Drinking was my go to fix
Now I face my fears
Haiku (or hokku) A Japanese verse form most often composed, in English versions, of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables. A haiku often features an image, or a pair of images, meant to depict the essence of a specific moment in time.