Sober Poetry

Poetry is my outlet. I wrote this one today to mark 30 days. I invite other writers to add poems to the thread. Please respect copyright, and no sharing without attribution.
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30 days without, and 30 days within.
Looks like I’ll have to wipe off this grin. Looks like 30 more, feels like 30 less.
Will she make it, is anybody’s guess.
My knuckles are white,
and the wine’s still red.
This counting has me out of my head.
My heart keeps beating,
but I don’t have a clue,
why in spite of its effort,
I still feel blue.
It’s time to count the flaws,
it’s time make amends.
It’s time to make my power,
it’s time to count my friends.
The gun has fired, so I’ll place my bets.
But what if this counting
is as good as it gets?

~Heather W.
poetry recovery #30days

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Lovely. I appreciate you sharing this with us.

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I love it! PLEASE keep sharing your poetry.

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I’m a grumbling old Drifter
I guzzle cold liquor
Like my life it’s in pieces
A puzzle with no picture
I mumble alone,
Watch the struggle unfold
From a crumbling cardboard box
I call my humble abode
I’m trouble to none
people I avoid on purpose
Whenever I’m around
You seem to be annoyed or nervous
I’m coined as worthless
just lost and lonely
Rotting slowly maybe
you would understand me
If you got to know me
Society hates me
Your despising me greatly
You don’t know everything
I loved died with my brother
Any Ambitions I have lies with my folks and my babies
my insanity is a drunk driver
thats been driving me crazy
Alcoholics Anthem

For Michael love your baby brother.

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That’s beautiful Thomas. Thank you for sharing that. Really good.

That is a poem for my brother Michael he passed away from psoriasis of the liver in 2014 due to being an alcoholic. He was my :heart:. I’m glad I came across this post

Powerful. Thank you for sharing.

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I’m so sorry for your tragic loss. :cry:

Ty thats means a lot. But I have learned a lot from that :heart: break and I know my brother would be happy that I got something important out of it. Your a good women ty again.

A 74-year-old bullet
got lodged inside his head.
On his way to meet the kaiser,
it shot his serenity dead.

We could see it sticking out,
like a child out of bed.
That bullet from the dark,
kept begging to be fed.

Afraid to wake the beast,
we gave it what it took:
Our sanity, his dignity,
but not a second look.

No, we could not look at it.
We took a bullet of our own,
and it stuck inside our hearts,
like child that’s never grown.

16 years since he’s passed away,
192 months since he’s
touched a drop,
but that bullet from his head,
still suckles a poison pop.

All that’s left to do
is shoot the kaiser from this thread,
to feed the kids their dinner,
and lay Grandpa back in bed.

I’m so sorry we couldn’t save him
from the chains of way back then,
when the kaiser won the battle,
and he was never whole again.
~H.W.

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My Sobriety Haiku.

It’s Day 56.
Life is now better than great.
No more booze for me. :grinning_face_with_smiling_eyes:

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Great poem! I really like this one. It has great flow and symbolism. Very nice job!

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Not so much a poem but it’s something

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Really nice! Share some more :slight_smile:

Okay, I’m not a poet. I don’t even necessarily enjoy poetry. I appreciate it though. I’ve taken Literature classes studying it. So, I get it. One poem has stuck with me through the years. Here it is:

Richard Cory
BY EDWIN ARLINGTON ROBINSON
Whenever Richard Cory went down town,
We people on the pavement looked at him:
He was a gentleman from sole to crown,
Clean favored, and imperially slim.

And he was always quietly arrayed,
And he was always human when he talked;
But still he fluttered pulses when he said,
“Good-morning,” and he glittered when he walked.

And he was rich—yes, richer than a king—
And admirably schooled in every grace:
In fine, we thought that he was everything
To make us wish that we were in his place.

So on we worked, and waited for the light,
And went without the meat, and cursed the bread;
And Richard Cory, one calm summer night,
Went home and put a bullet through his head.

So… I guess what I’m saying here is that everyone has skeletons in their closets. Or as some of you have said, a whole graveyard. We can’t judge, we can only love. And absolutely never compare yourself to someone else. You would never wish for their problems, nor they yours.

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Ran across this poem. Thought it was worth sharing!

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Excellent. What inspired it?

I dont know. I feel happy with myself. I just thought it would be some good insight to others.

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That’s great :rose::sunflower::rose: love it

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The distance between now and forever grows larger the longer we go
Life without cruches exposes our vulnerabilities through which we must grow.

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